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Graylyn had been looking for something in the kitchen for eleven minutes.

This was different from merely not finding something. Not finding something was an accident. Graylyn was conducting a campaign.

She stood in front of the refrigerator in Drake’s enormous white T-shirt, drinking strawberry milk through a straw and staring into the middle distance as if the refrigerator had betrayed her politically.

“What are you looking for?” Trish called from the living room.

“If I knew that, I’d have found it.”

“That isn’t how looking works,” Dustin said.

“It is for her,” said Drake.

The refrigerator door was covered with magnets collected by Drake’s mother from places she had visited without enjoying: Wisconsin Dells, Niagara Falls, the Lincoln Presidential Library. Graylyn shifted a magnet shaped like a wedge of cheese and opened the door again.

Cold light entered the kitchen. Nothing had changed.

There was half a watermelon under plastic wrap, three bottles of beer nobody was supposed to touch, mustard, eggs, a bowl of spaghetti with a plate balanced over it, and a small foil package that Graylyn had already inspected twice.

“What’s in the foil?” Chuck asked from the floor.

“You asked me that five minutes ago.”

“I’m checking for developments.”

“It’s half an onion.”

“That’s worse than nothing.”

Chuck was lying on his back between the coffee table and the sofa, tossing a tennis ball toward the ceiling and catching it inches above his face. Every sixth or seventh throw, Alvin flinched. Chuck knew this and had therefore adjusted his rhythm to make the flinching impossible to predict.

They had arrived around noon without arranging to arrive. By two o’clock everyone was there except Angela, who was at a swim meet and had threatened to appear later smelling of chlorine and victory. Nobody had any money. Nobody had a car available. Nobody could agree upon a movie, and nobody genuinely wanted to go anywhere.

It was Saturday. The day had opened around them like an empty public building whose guards had gone home.

Drake sat at the kitchen table making a list of possible band names on the back of an envelope. He had no band. This freed him to concentrate on naming it.

“The Carbonated Saints,” he said.

“No,” said five people.

“The Velvet Emergency.”

Trish considered it. “Almost.”

“It sounds like a feminine-hygiene crisis,” Dustin said.

“Then it has menace.”

Graylyn shut the refrigerator and began opening drawers.

She had her dark hair gathered loosely at the back of her head, although strands had already escaped around her face. She moved through the kitchen with the unquestioned authority of somebody searching a house she did not live in. Drake’s family had long ago ceased to regard this as unusual. Graylyn knew where they kept the batteries, the aspirin, the birthday candles and the envelopes, although she could never remember where they kept the glasses.

She opened the silverware drawer.

“Not in there,” Drake said.

“You don’t know what I’m looking for.”

“Neither do you.”

“I’ll know it when I see it.”

This answer satisfied everybody. It was, after all, Graylyn’s governing principle in art, clothing, romance and refrigerators.

Trish wandered in and leaned against the counter. Without asking, she took Graylyn’s strawberry milk, drank from it, and returned it. Graylyn accepted the carton without looking at her. The maneuver had been performed so smoothly that it appeared to involve a single person with four hands.

“What about toast?” Trish asked.

“I don’t want toast.”

“You looked in the breadbox.”

“I wanted to know what our options were.”

“Our options are toast.”

“Our civilization is finished.”

From the living room came the soft mechanical click of Dustin turning the stereo dial. Static rushed through the apartment; fragments of baseball, an advertisement for carpeting, and half a drum fill passed by. He stopped when he found Bowie.

Chuck sat up immediately.

“Louder.”

“It’s already loud.”

“It’s Saturday loud. I want historically significant loud.”

Alvin reached over from the sofa and turned the volume down two marks. Chuck reached up and turned it back one. This was the compromise they had evolved over several years: Alvin reduced things by two; Chuck restored one; civilization continued.

Graylyn opened the cabinet above the stove.

“What do you think you lost?” Drake asked.

“I didn’t lose anything.”

“Then this is looting.”

“I’m hungry.”

“There’s spaghetti.”

“I don’t want spaghetti.”

“Toast,” Trish reminded her.

Graylyn gave her a chilly look and continued searching.

Drake watched her from the table. He knew that if he got up and helped, she would tell him to sit down. If he ignored her, she would eventually accuse him of withholding information. If he named every item in the kitchen, she would become furious. The correct role was to remain available while pretending not to observe.

Longtime friendship consisted largely of learning which forms of assistance were insulting.

Alvin appeared in the doorway. “I could make grilled cheese.”

Graylyn stopped.

Everyone felt the slight change in atmospheric pressure.

“With what kind of cheese?” she asked.

Alvin opened the refrigerator and looked. “Orange.”

“That’s not a kind.”

“It’s the kind we have.”

Graylyn considered the orange cheese. She took another drink of strawberry milk.

“Maybe.”

Alvin removed the bread, butter and cheese. He did not ask whether anyone else wanted a sandwich. That question would only produce confusion, false refusals and a second cooking operation ten minutes later. He began making six.

This was his role in the group, although nobody had assigned it to him. Alvin anticipated the needs people planned to deny until the needs became unbearable. He did this without announcing that he was taking care of them, which was why they permitted it.

Dustin came into the kitchen carrying the tennis ball, which he had confiscated after Chuck knocked over an ashtray.

“What is she looking for?”

“Meaning,” Drake said.

“A viable future,” said Trish.

“Something salty,” Graylyn said suddenly.

The room became still.

“That’s it?” Chuck called. “You turned the house upside down because you wanted something salty?”

“I didn’t know until now.”

Drake rose, reached over the refrigerator and brought down a bag of potato chips.

Graylyn stared at him.

“You knew those were there?”

“Yes.”

“You watched me look.”

“I asked what you were looking for.”

“I didn’t know.”

“Neither did I.”

Graylyn took the bag from him. Their fingers barely touched, but an entire old mechanism engaged: accusation, defense, forgiveness, ownership. It ran silently beneath the moment like the workings of a clock.

She opened the chips and ate one.

“Those are stale,” Dustin said.

Graylyn ate another. “They’re perfect.”

Alvin’s first sandwich began to hiss in the pan. Bowie gave way to an advertisement, and Chuck shouted for Dustin to find another station. Trish perched on the counter and stole a potato chip every time Graylyn looked away. Graylyn knew. Trish knew she knew. Neither disturbed the arrangement.

Drake returned to his envelope.

“The Stale Perfection,” he said.

Graylyn glanced at him. “That’s the band.”

Outside, the afternoon was brilliantly ordinary. Cars moved along the street. A lawn mower started somewhere and stopped again. The whole adult world appeared to be occupied with errands, repairs, appointments, ambitions—things that led to other things.

Inside, nothing led anywhere.

Alvin cut the sandwiches diagonally because Trish believed they tasted better that way. Dustin found a station playing “Eight Miles High,” and Chuck, for once, did not demand something louder. Graylyn stood by the refrigerator with her strawberry milk and the open bag of chips, chewing thoughtfully, no longer looking for anything.

They had nowhere to go and nothing to become before dinner.

For one Saturday afternoon, this was not emptiness.

It was arrival.